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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Agree/Disagree(观点类)
话题科技类 - 太空探索
关键词space exploration, waste of money, urgent needs
考察能力权衡长期科学投资与短期社会需求

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 让步:pressing problems exist
├── 转折:disagree with "waste"
└── 立场预告:yields benefits that justify cost

【主体段1 - 承认反方】
├── 引出:Critics argue...
├── 具体化:poverty, water, healthcare
├── 情感吸引力:morally questionable
└── 伏笔:oversimplifies

【主体段2 - 核心反驳】
├── 转折:In reality
├── 论点:substantial returns on investment
├── 证据1:具体技术转化(GPS等)
├── 证据2:气候监测
├── 证据3:就业和创新
└── 总结:dividends exceed investment

【主体段3 - 人文价值】
├── 升华:fundamental human need
├── 历史类比:ocean voyages
└── 反面论证:impoverish civilisation

【结尾段】
├── 重申:balanced approach
├── 服务谁:humanity in the long run
└── 重新框架:not whether, but how

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
pressing problems紧迫的问题many pressing problems demand attention
morally questionable道德上可疑的it seems morally questionable to...
substantial returns可观的回报generated substantial returns on investment
dividends红利/回报economic and intellectual dividends
impoverish使贫乏impoverish our civilisation
shortsighted短视的would be shortsighted
the drive to explore探索的动力curiosity and the drive to explore

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

这些表达可以用于其他类似话题:

原句可迁移到
"yields benefits that justify its considerable cost"任何需要论证投资回报的话题
"the long-term dividends far exceed the initial investment"教育投资、基础设施、科研经费
"expanding our horizons has been central to human progress"全球化、文化交流、学术自由
"limiting ourselves to immediate concerns would impoverish..."任何短期vs长期的讨论
"a balanced approach serves humanity best"需要提出折中方案的话题

💭 思考延伸


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